TUGS - Round 1 - Intermediate WIP Thread

[Frario]

I might try and fix up some things, but I'm more or less Finished:

That is so kick ass, but I wanna help you get even more kick ass.
I can't tell much, but you should make the clouds a bit more longer in width, try to browse pictures of drawn clouds, you'll see what i mean. So, kinda give them a little "trail" .
Maybe try to get rid of the last sky shade, since it's a bit too dark for a day sky, and if you try looking up the sky , the sky is always uni-coloured, except near the surface. Lastly, try to add a, white, 1 pixel thin, line to give the spaceships a bit more shine. example: Mouse ship from Kirby and Masked Dedede
Have you already tried to use some anti aliasing on the spaceship's shines? If you're keeping it colour limited, then don't worry about what I said

keep going Joshr, your entry was really the clean quality from your customs i expected of you and you're doing even better : D