Okay dude seriously.
Stick with stuff like those doodles because it is far more strong than any of your anime stuff.
I mean, it has better sense of shape and way, waaaay more energy.
That or just apply some of that energy to your more anime-styled drawings. I'm serious.
Really, seriously. Try not to think about style so much and let it develop naturally. If you force yourself into a style then your work will suffer.
Stick with stuff like those doodles because it is far more strong than any of your anime stuff.
I mean, it has better sense of shape and way, waaaay more energy.
That or just apply some of that energy to your more anime-styled drawings. I'm serious.
Really, seriously. Try not to think about style so much and let it develop naturally. If you force yourself into a style then your work will suffer.