06-02-2008, 10:29 PM
The wings look too dimensional, very round, not as flat as you would expect a wing to be.
Highlights are worst on the last frame of each set. the thin part of the wings should be brighter than the rest of the wing assuming the lighting hasn't changed from the previous frames. The blue tips should probably have some highlights in at least a couple of the frames.
Then just the shape of the highlights, rather square in places, like his back, and some strange pointed highlights that don't make sense with the soft shading everywhere else.
Highlights are worst on the last frame of each set. the thin part of the wings should be brighter than the rest of the wing assuming the lighting hasn't changed from the previous frames. The blue tips should probably have some highlights in at least a couple of the frames.
Then just the shape of the highlights, rather square in places, like his back, and some strange pointed highlights that don't make sense with the soft shading everywhere else.