03-05-2021, 07:29 PM
If a previous critique was on the hair, I would suggest:
- Relooking at the PJ-sprites for Ness, as they have his hair a bit messier to convey bedhead-hair (which can be messy overall, cowlicks, etc). I'd look at a reference for Jeff's hair and try to think of a messy hairstyle that might be appropriate for him.
- The diagonal sprites (mainly the ones with his back facing us) could maybe convey a bit more of a rounder shape in the orange hair-lines? Kind of like what's in the side-profile sprites, so just adding or shifting a pixel on the hair-lines to make his head seem rounder could help.
Otherwise, I don't see how you could push them further while still retaining the OG style. o:
- Relooking at the PJ-sprites for Ness, as they have his hair a bit messier to convey bedhead-hair (which can be messy overall, cowlicks, etc). I'd look at a reference for Jeff's hair and try to think of a messy hairstyle that might be appropriate for him.
- The diagonal sprites (mainly the ones with his back facing us) could maybe convey a bit more of a rounder shape in the orange hair-lines? Kind of like what's in the side-profile sprites, so just adding or shifting a pixel on the hair-lines to make his head seem rounder could help.
Otherwise, I don't see how you could push them further while still retaining the OG style. o: