05-21-2008, 04:35 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-21-2008, 04:38 PM by SamsterBoy.)
Zee Wrote:I'll be honest, it's not very good, you're mixing sprites and series and all this stuff. It feels tacky, underdone and slapped together all shipshod and such. It's really... blah, I mean it's not funny, there's no plot, and it's really boring overall.
I mixed the sprites for the 2nd page for the LULZ, apparently the funny didn't come across at that point. I apologize there. The first page was based off a Brawl Fight. I agree with mixing sprites & not funny cause many people like different kinds of humour (not to mention I'm no comedian myself), but...
What do you mean no Plot? There's a plot, it's just not a lot is really explained in the first two pages, and all will be fully explained when the two other pages come by.
Alex Wrote:Make sure you use the right usage. You're saying your when you mean you're.
Also, I didn't really understand anything. The characters just seem to fly out of nowhere.
That I can fix no problem. Thanks for that pointer.
Characters fly out of nowhere. I'm guessing you mean Trunks and Krillin scene. That scene was made a bit random, but it was meant to be funny.
Thanks for the advice guys. Anymore would be awesome.
One Question: What do you guys think about the overall layout?