Welcome to my comic thread!
No proper website or anything for this yet, but linking to another forum where I posted it would be kinda weird, so with some help from Dazz I managed to make this post transportable to TSR's forums.
Been working on this for 3 weeks or so, pretty satisfied with what I have so far; just need to come up with a name for it already.
Hope you enjoy the read if you decide to read it;
[latest page: page 65]
For those confused about the format:
there's 1 world where 3 stories take place.
![[Image: hero-pic.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi59.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fg302%2FNeorice%2Fhero-pic.png&hash=878d623967047efa1cc4e4cae3726251)
Noah's story.
Burk's story.
And Tobi's story.
In essence I'll be running 3 comics in the same style within the same world.
DA Comic Gallery
http://neoriceisgood.deviantart.com/gall...mic-series
Tobi: 22 pages
Noah: 22 pages
Burk: 21 pages
Comic
Burk Chapter 1 [1 to 5]
Burk Chapter 1 [6 to 10]
Noah Chapter 2 [11 till 15]
Noah Chapter 2 [16 till 20]
Tobi Chapter 3 [21 till 25]
Tobi Chapter 3 [26 till 30]
Chapter 4
Page 31-35
Page 36-40
Page 41-45
Page 46-50
Page 51-55
Page 56-60
Page 61-65
No proper website or anything for this yet, but linking to another forum where I posted it would be kinda weird, so with some help from Dazz I managed to make this post transportable to TSR's forums.
Been working on this for 3 weeks or so, pretty satisfied with what I have so far; just need to come up with a name for it already.
Hope you enjoy the read if you decide to read it;
[latest page: page 65]
![[+]](images/collapse_collapsed.png "[+]")
Spoiler![[Image: Burk_65_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc94.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F361%2F9%2Fb%2FBurk_65_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=8eb4ec6c97fe1a2e56675c44fb0e0d88)
For those confused about the format:
there's 1 world where 3 stories take place.
Noah's story.
Burk's story.
And Tobi's story.
In essence I'll be running 3 comics in the same style within the same world.
DA Comic Gallery
http://neoriceisgood.deviantart.com/gall...mic-series
Tobi: 22 pages
Noah: 22 pages
Burk: 21 pages
Comic
Burk Chapter 1 [1 to 5]
Burk Chapter 1 [6 to 10]
![[Image: Burk_1_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc25.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F329%2Fd%2Fe%2FBurk_1_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=e4f525c30f7b8d33c75adbd2167f96d1)
![[Image: Burk_2_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc12.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F329%2F8%2F2%2FBurk_2_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=e71e97b5904ff3443d5327b9cad049da)
![[Image: Burk_3_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc24.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F329%2Fb%2Fc%2FBurk_3_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=f7cf785832257f60c861db49a07b8c04)
![[Image: comicburk14mp8.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg266.imageshack.us%2Fimg266%2F1469%2Fcomicburk14mp8.png&hash=ab28b651cd524ae75b0af343c13d3c00)
![[Image: Burk_5_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc43.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F329%2F8%2Ff%2FBurk_5_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=638db9ecab17223867855221def2a056)
Noah Chapter 2 [11 till 15]
![[Image: Burk_6_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc55.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F329%2Fe%2Fc%2FBurk_6_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=2afcd64e1b9217bd5b5c9c790a315291)
![[Image: Burk_7_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc35.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F329%2F6%2F5%2FBurk_7_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=0a00710b5360e94bbf55bb4ca902a2ce)
![[Image: Burk_8_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc38.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F330%2F8%2F0%2FBurk_8_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=636149d696f2a9bba7bfad69a14917a4)
![[Image: Burk_9_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc95.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F331%2F9%2F6%2FBurk_9_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=c84034029ea29e581ce72dc10f3341ba)
![[Image: Burk_10_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc32.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F331%2Fd%2F2%2FBurk_10_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=642bd144eee0d7effbe65fc387cac41e)
Noah Chapter 2 [16 till 20]
![[Image: Noah_1_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc90.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F331%2F1%2F7%2FNoah_1_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=136540687a44abb384f8109a4a8e22d3)
![[Image: Noah_12_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc25.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F331%2F0%2F4%2FNoah_12_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=a48399ec1c5972f433c5c0de323cdf63)
![[Image: Noah_13_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc37.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F332%2F9%2F7%2FNoah_13_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=4e90a410fe2e80e44a8a37bd5f7c62f8)
![[Image: Noah_14_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc37.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F332%2Fe%2Fa%2FNoah_14_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=d0884647ce5ef09ecd3f8050f6b3c818)
![[Image: Noah_15_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc92.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F333%2F0%2F9%2FNoah_15_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=0dccf440a68aceb537ca5f60382750fe)
Tobi Chapter 3 [21 till 25]
![[Image: Noah_16_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc37.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F333%2F0%2F6%2FNoah_16_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=c00dcaa05ee5278c9d83e1477cea4549)
![[Image: Noah_17_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc74.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F334%2F7%2F3%2FNoah_17_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=7b119e3d6f40d815a612d22b72105ee9)
![[Image: Noah_18_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc07.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F334%2F8%2F1%2FNoah_18_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=f153a0e608f85716ad04cf7bb1c85ece)
![[Image: Noah_19_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc63.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F335%2Fc%2F0%2FNoah_19_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=e2220ab421d09907c6c137870e0a37ef)
![[Image: Noah_20_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc32.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F335%2Fd%2Fb%2FNoah_20_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=2fdc9afaf9c39d86d26411c2ee7043b6)
Tobi Chapter 3 [26 till 30]
![[Image: Tobi_21_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc73.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F337%2F9%2Fc%2FTobi_21_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=7c9a78ac8a715706432fe4b26dbae874)
![[Image: Tobi_22_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc64.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F337%2Fb%2F7%2FTobi_22_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=4c27287cab30bdd7256a095b31766fb1)
![[Image: Tobi_23_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc88.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F338%2F6%2F0%2FTobi_23_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=16b44a0c0589136f45c59e8179bbf464)
![[Image: Tobi_24_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc62.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F339%2F0%2Fa%2FTobi_24_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=a5c96897f752370ef61382a33d12544d)
![[Image: Tobi_25_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc36.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F340%2F1%2Fb%2FTobi_25_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=2c281b0f7e1b715b47cf05b88d38ab0d)
![[Image: Tobi_26_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc35.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F341%2F5%2F0%2FTobi_26_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=f5bdf88119251aaae4ecc0389134b15f)
![[Image: Tobi_27_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc59.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F341%2F6%2Fa%2FTobi_27_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=b9560c3f0c10a03524606d669cafa4a9)
![[Image: Tobi_28_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc51.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F341%2Fb%2F5%2FTobi_28_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=b00ae9e24e914aee473f36f08807eebf)
![[Image: Tobi_29_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc23.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F341%2Fe%2F9%2FTobi_29_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=2e5c87a7ca6568705ff7656e0b9598b3)
![[Image: Tobi_30_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc15.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F342%2Fd%2F9%2FTobi_30_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=c5a483e6f811c5a35327d56be238e0d2)
Chapter 4
Page 31-35
Page 36-40
![[Image: Burk_31_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc12.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F342%2Fa%2F3%2FBurk_31_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=6184832fdb5f0b786522a5bb584bc7f2)
![[Image: Burk_32_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc66.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F342%2Fe%2F2%2FBurk_32_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=aa85d57805d1d8b50a237b4d090a298f)
![[Image: Noah_33_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc62.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F342%2F3%2F0%2FNoah_33_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=37fcd62b0bef4dd679992569672a15af)
![[Image: Tobi_34_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc29.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F343%2F1%2F0%2FTobi_34_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=9c2761b2f42a0133376b4223fd07b26d)
![[Image: Burk_35_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc76.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F343%2F2%2F1%2FBurk_35_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=f862dd02c9a9b6931b2e01e67f9b3d39)
Page 41-45
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![[Image: Tobi_37_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc78.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F345%2F7%2F3%2FTobi_37_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=9c3e3e58d66bafba6c006ba61cec8834)
![[Image: Tobi_38_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc50.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F345%2F4%2Fd%2FTobi_38_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=dc2c2410de5f50ce8671af973f551077)
![[Image: Noah_39_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc97.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F347%2Ff%2F1%2FNoah_39_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=b2ad0cdc913b3c04c2c751380d0cd2fd)
![[Image: Tobi_40_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc94.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F347%2Fd%2F6%2FTobi_40_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=fa65a837c8c839f92cb59cc2bdb213b1)
Page 46-50
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![[Image: Burk_42_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc74.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F348%2F7%2Fe%2FBurk_42_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=5714d15e69f66375c5b2fa98b78db1e1)
![[Image: Noah_43_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc78.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F349%2F2%2Fc%2FNoah_43_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=4a09b2691ea56af7b7cc9a5be362df00)
![[Image: Noah_44_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc16.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F352%2F6%2F7%2FNoah_44_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=a0b3a5bd77441523fbd9f7e2e77ad035)
![[Image: Burk_45_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc50.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F353%2Ff%2Fa%2FBurk_45_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=8c1f809bcd76fd4c371338ad1c5644a3)
Page 51-55
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![[Image: Tobi_47_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc40.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F354%2F6%2F6%2FTobi_47_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=169aa97513eee9fd2201783c8a19db68)
![[Image: Burk_48_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc69.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F355%2F9%2F4%2FBurk_48_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=a288a54f618d6289b16a04c1f3b8778c)
![[Image: Burk_49_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc16.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F356%2Fc%2Fa%2FBurk_49_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=51a6ceb400bcd91326d031a213693166)
![[Image: Noah_50_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc29.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F356%2Ff%2F2%2FNoah_50_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=6c411cfd0f0605dea57cf77c6196aa33)
Page 56-60
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![[Image: Tobi_52_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc52.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F357%2F1%2Fb%2FTobi_52_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=4725b4d9d5b106281cfb031557043046)
![[Image: Burk_53_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc94.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F357%2F7%2F6%2FBurk_53_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=8c11182d74ce6187981bc9a2c4d80986)
![[Image: Noah_54_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc85.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F358%2Fa%2F2%2FNoah_54_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=58f534781b1663fd87d9c581d74c1242)
![[Image: Tobi_55_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc84.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F358%2Fc%2F6%2FTobi_55_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=37d2e34e72c9948a33e1cfd6c7fc3240)
Page 61-65
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![[Image: Noah_57_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc48.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F358%2Ff%2F6%2FNoah_57_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=7b0bb8486850f010042e0def9ec12d5b)
![[Image: Noah_58_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc64.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F358%2Fc%2F3%2FNoah_58_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=0fcb0513e33ef0d86750e378f49ebf62)
![[Image: Noah_59_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc37.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F359%2F4%2Fa%2FNoah_59_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=a1bccd80e66b2e04df5f06c4f59e2740)
![[Image: Noah_60_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc45.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F359%2Fd%2Fc%2FNoah_60_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=a0ec6a190d625562371e8cb87b172a9a)
![[Image: Tobi_61_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc06.deviantart.com%2Ffs38%2Ff%2F2008%2F359%2F3%2F7%2FTobi_61_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=217b0d849ca182c2cecf77efd942489e)
![[Image: Tobi_62_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc89.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F360%2Fd%2F8%2FTobi_62_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=273b692d468acd0962701427a5a8e498)
![[Image: Tobi_63_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc37.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F360%2F1%2F5%2FTobi_63_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=08de70a65eb90ad594dce99fb157fcac)
![[Image: Burk_64_by_Neoriceisgood.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc27.deviantart.com%2Ffs39%2Ff%2F2008%2F360%2F9%2F7%2FBurk_64_by_Neoriceisgood.png&hash=40d10d86378c479cd7e4f1ac0465d356)