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[Joxon]

Much better, IMO. With the colours, the darker shades could use hue-shifting, which, in the case of shading, is changing the hue (colour) in between shades. For example, having a red, a lighter red with a slightly more orange hue, and a darker red with a slightly more purple hue - Darker shades are generally shifted towards blue, and lighter to yellow (I think).