Paper Mario help wanted

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Paper Mario help wanted

E-Man

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08-23-2015, 09:48 PM

Alright then, but I hope you don't completely change everything, such as altering the structure of the story or changing my lines too much. Personally, I'm just looking for changing the ending a little bit because I'm not happy with Yellow's rant at the end. Also, getting rid of some unnecessary exposition wouldn't hurt either.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/5jyprm1r6duzsl....docx?dl=0

By the way, there are some typos in it. I would fix them, but my copy of Microsoft Word is still on the fritz.

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