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What I think you should do about the hair is add an extra shade to the lower part, so it'll look rounder. Adding some more detailed shading to the clothes will give them more of a shape, and more contrast on the colors would help them stand out from each other.
Also, making her left arm more visible helps make her shape look better.

[Image: Tweaks_here_and_there_strip2.png]
This is how it could look.

There's also a few jagged parts that should be fixed, and some things that should be rounded out as well. This can be a really great sprite if you fix it up.
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eight sprite-a-bit - by shrubbyfrog - 06-30-2015, 12:08 PM
RE: Steven's Party o' Sprites ((Need Critiques)) - by Neweegee - 07-05-2015, 06:26 PM
RE: eight sprite-a-bit - by shrubbyfrog - 08-01-2021, 12:50 AM
RE: eight sprite-a-bit - by shrubbyfrog - 02-26-2024, 01:07 AM

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