Pixel Practice - Terrorverse

[Gors]

the body twists way too much on this one, try keeping it facing forward mostly. The hand getting shaded when going on her back further emphasizes the twist.

the ambient lighting (the yellow light around the outline, after the shade blob) is too harsh both in this image and the next one, even with the edit. Use a darker color.

Also, design idea, her design should emphasize the fact that she is a candle, e.g:



waxy white skin and 'molten' hairstyle. You can further improve the design by making her scatter wax drops as she does some actions, too.