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It's a good start, you imitated the style from Jetters' sprite almost spot-on. However, the silhouette/pose isn't very readable. Everything is compact and squashed together. So I made an edit:
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I used some women from other games as references, especially Jubilee from MvC. Notice how their bodies in the latter three frames are broken down into parts of different colours? Not only that, but also how colours group things (e.g. Jubilee's shorts and her boots) or distinguish them (Cammy's red fists against her blue suit). That, along with a clear silhouette (which is helped by little breathing spaces - check out the one between Lilith's arm and her waist/hip, or what's happening with Jubilee's raised arm) will make your sprite more readable.
The hair (?) was rather long on your original so I shortened it. I changed the dress in regards to what I said about colour.

I hope it helps! Smile
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Bloom [?] - by Garamonde - 05-30-2014, 11:04 AM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Yangfly Master - 05-30-2014, 11:28 AM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Kitsu - 05-30-2014, 11:51 AM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 05-30-2014, 01:34 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Iocus - 05-30-2014, 06:59 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Ploaj - 05-31-2014, 01:41 AM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Yangfly Master - 05-31-2014, 03:24 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by E-Man - 05-31-2014, 03:28 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Yangfly Master - 05-31-2014, 03:44 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by E-Man - 05-31-2014, 04:13 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by TomGuycott - 05-31-2014, 04:21 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Garamonde - 05-31-2014, 05:21 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Iocus - 05-31-2014, 07:23 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Garamonde - 06-13-2014, 12:34 AM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 06-13-2014, 06:20 AM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Garamonde - 06-13-2014, 12:51 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Baegal - 06-13-2014, 01:10 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by NICKtendo DS - 08-11-2015, 06:23 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by TomGuycott - 08-11-2015, 06:38 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by NICKtendo DS - 08-11-2015, 07:01 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by TheShyGuy - 08-11-2015, 07:52 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Garamonde - 08-11-2015, 08:45 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by NICKtendo DS - 08-12-2015, 03:22 AM
RE: Bloom [?] - by recme - 08-11-2015, 09:14 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by TheShyGuy - 08-18-2015, 04:30 AM

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