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A bit rusty on pixel art :p
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I think the mushroom trunk (where the little face is) is too undershaded considering how the cap has some many shades. Also, the cap is not just a flat thing on top of it, it's a half sphere-like object that casts shadow on the trunk. The trunk has too little contrast-- you can hardly tell that second shade is there. It also might be a little banded.

The tree stump looks decent (but I agree with E-man about the contrast), though on closer inspection, the outline on the roots looks a little jittery. Try cleaning that up.

Oh, just wondering, is there a particular reason why the mushroom is uneven? I mean, it's not a big deal, but nobody would bat an eye if it was symmetrical. Maybe the dots on the sides of the cap could be a little further to the sides to make the center look less crowded, too.
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A bit rusty on pixel art :p - by Solid_Spy - 04-24-2014, 07:16 AM
RE: A bit rusty on pixel art :p - by E-Man - 04-24-2014, 07:18 AM
RE: A bit rusty on pixel art :p - by Solid_Spy - 04-24-2014, 07:24 AM
RE: A bit rusty on pixel art :p - by Kelvin - 04-24-2014, 04:54 PM
RE: A bit rusty on pixel art :p - by Solid_Spy - 04-24-2014, 05:37 PM
RE: A bit rusty on pixel art :p - by Kelvin - 04-24-2014, 10:09 PM
RE: A bit rusty on pixel art :p - by Solid_Spy - 04-25-2014, 12:21 AM
RE: A bit rusty on pixel art :p - by Iocus - 04-25-2014, 09:54 AM

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