03-05-2013, 06:49 PM
Proportion-wise: maybe you have the right number of heads in total, but it may be a bit skewed when it comes to the proportion of the torso compared to the overall height and/or legs, or even the width of her hips or shoulders...
Regarding the style, I think it's interesting to see the kind of sketches Miu does in comparison:
![[Image: Jamscribbles.jpg]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.luvpeaches.com%2Fwp-content%2Fuploads%2F2010%2F11%2FJamscribbles.jpg&hash=e48edeb302743eacc839c71af36e7c62)
CookingPeach/Miu likes "sexy". Don't hesitate in making the breasts bigger, but more importantly look for references to get this anime/sexy/cute idea to shine through. What makes his art good is the way he can make one of his characters seem very innocent and naive whilst giving a sexual and voyeuristic dimension to them. In that sense, you have to think carefully about what you make us want to see: is it cleavage? A behind, perhaps? What is the character candidly doing which could emphasise on these?
Regarding the style, I think it's interesting to see the kind of sketches Miu does in comparison:
CookingPeach/Miu likes "sexy". Don't hesitate in making the breasts bigger, but more importantly look for references to get this anime/sexy/cute idea to shine through. What makes his art good is the way he can make one of his characters seem very innocent and naive whilst giving a sexual and voyeuristic dimension to them. In that sense, you have to think carefully about what you make us want to see: is it cleavage? A behind, perhaps? What is the character candidly doing which could emphasise on these?
![[Image: x1aIZ2e.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2Fx1aIZ2e.gif&hash=97db2b9d8ee12084506a352f3a8c7f84)
![[Image: shrine.gif]](https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/344477/shrine.gif)