[Art][NSFW] Bombshells Naughty Sketchbook

[Bombshell93]

the lines over lines problem, I typically go over the final lines a bit stronger, but I tend to do that just before the line art.
as for the dodgey knees and lack of boniness I agree, but part of it (agreeably not all and I will work on it) is because those guides I would not use for the final image, there is still work to be done on them (hence the feet still being triangles) BUT the problem is still noticeable in the nude pic where the clothing was never intended to cover that portion, hence the problem is of fault rather than laziness.

as the style goes, I'm trying to go for something along the lines of Peaches and Cream though doing a comparison I have got to work on that too.
I'll try another pic (same character for the sake of simple comparison) with some tweaks to fix the proportions.

oh! one last thing I did compare the lengths with anatomy study pictures and everything lines up cleanly so the shortening of the legs was not necessary in your picture.

EDIT (well its an edit while I'm writing the comment so not technically an edit but w/e):
seeing your edit I did have problems with placing the breasts, but I think the root of that was problems placing the arms, the shoulders are too smooth and the arms too close to the body which lead to the arm invading breast space (hence pushing it into the other)

thank you a lot for the help, I'll be back when I have a more structurally sound picture.

EDIT: new try, with the exception of the arms I'd say its looking a bit better