Let me take a good dump and touch your face [art]

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Hey there, here to try and help with anatomy again.
First of all, let's compare your reference and your drawing:

As you can see, a lot of perspective distortion occurs, which dilates the closest parts of her body. Her jaw is square, and her mouth curled downwards. She leans quite far forwards onto her right arm, which makes her chest tilt forward, like the other arm too; the pectoral muscle is diagonal. Her left shoulder is almost in line with her mouth, and her right is in line with her chin, if you ignore her hair.


Defined the neck and clavicles, added more shape to the leg and buttock. Also, you may notice that I added a small line that suggests the back.
If you want me to go through some bone or muscle details, ask away.


PS: You said you based the drawing off the Suicide Girls photo, and you made her green: maybe if you filled us out more on your artistic intent, we could help you get closer to what you want?