02-08-2013, 04:25 PM
I'd say for a first-level evolution it is too detailed and too "evolved", this one would be more suited for the first evolution I'd say.
I'm not familiar with Ken Sugimori's Pokémon style, but the shading looks a bit too blob-like in many parts and doesn't really show the threedimensionality of the object. Also, in areas like the neck, it should go all the way up to the line and not stop shortly before it. You can use selections in your painting program to be able to draw all the way to the line with those blurry pens.
I'm not familiar with Ken Sugimori's Pokémon style, but the shading looks a bit too blob-like in many parts and doesn't really show the threedimensionality of the object. Also, in areas like the neck, it should go all the way up to the line and not stop shortly before it. You can use selections in your painting program to be able to draw all the way to the line with those blurry pens.