07-02-2012, 09:37 AM
i think that the animation for swordgirl is kind of extreme, I'd animate it slower. it mustn't be easy shaking a huge-ass sword like that. as for the shaky feeling on the sword, that's because the outline is broken. some anti-alias to render a straighter line would do good.
as for the boy, i don't know about his sleeve. it looks weird. That flapping necktie thing is also hard to read due to it being the same color from his skin/shirt.
as for the boy, i don't know about his sleeve. it looks weird. That flapping necktie thing is also hard to read due to it being the same color from his skin/shirt.





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