Faeldspr's Top-Down Sprites

[Jamuk]

That looks much better, thanks! My reason for picking the slightly more muted browns, was that the light red looks way too bright to me.

It looked like you'd just sketched the outline and then coloured it. Don't do that. By all means sketch it, but neaten it off afterwards.

I did sketch the outline, but I thought I did neaten it, can you just point out where the worst bits were so I can bear it in mind for the future, please?
Anyway, I did some more work, and added some scaly plates along his flank. I tried out the technique (I don't know if it has a name) used on SMB pipes, where there are stripes of shading to make it look round. (Note: Ignore the blank outline of the rest of him, I'll change that as it comes.)

Crit please.