Various Character Peoples

[StarSock64]

The face is overshaded and lacks readability, the lineart and shading on the hair make no sense, the neck is too fat, the legs aren't long enough compared to the torso, the new body outline doesn't make any sense because it doesn't follow the spinal cord, ribcage, and waist, and the colors need waaaay more saturation

I'd redo the entire palette, if not the entire sprite itself. In regards to the shading on the pants, the second shade doesn't have enough contrast from the darkest shade. It's likely three shades there isn't even necessary