can someone show me how to fix shadings

[Monty Oum]

on this I'm not sure how to fix it I think it looks good but I know I HAVE to remove the pillow shade, but when I attempt to do that I screw it up...BADLY!


here you go



yeah these are good (If thats what you thinking) took me a while to make em...well If you do show me how I'll addyou in the credit tag on the sheet