03-09-2009, 06:49 PM
You. Improved. A lot. 
The only thing i can say (because your style is very different from mine) is to remove the outline of that... thing...´s nose....
the one above the fishes...

The only thing i can say (because your style is very different from mine) is to remove the outline of that... thing...´s nose....
the one above the fishes...