Super Star Ultra Project - Phase 2

[Omegakyogre]

That looks bad. You desperately need to smooth out those outlines and the shading. His tongue is also out-of-style; It needs a black outline + anti-aliasing. In general, the whole thing needs a lot more anti-aliasing (for instance, the edges of his eyes and mouth) to better match the style.

Also, Tornado Kirby's walking sprites appear to have been shoddily pasted together. Historically speaking, as well, the tornado should be white and shouldn't be so solid; Use Squeak Squad's Tornado Kirby as a reference.

Sheets for this project aren't little projects that are quick and easy to complete well. If you aren't going to spend the time to make quality material, don't sprite for the project. Asking for style assistance and C&C is one thing, but don't try to post hastily created work as finalized.