01-31-2009, 06:16 AM
@Matt: Your clean is more in style, but it still needs work. The bandanna should be rounder, and needs a darker outline (not black) where it connects to Kirby's head. Also the broom doesn't look like a broom. Check this sheet for a reference. I also think Kirby should hold the broom differently. Why would he hold it upwards like that?