(01-28-2009, 09:15 PM)AgentLym Wrote: Hm... Torkirby, you may be right. Yo, Baegal, are you making Ado or Adeline? (Ado has no arms, like yours; Adeline has arms. ) Arms won't be that hard to fix, though.
And, A.J. Nitro, looks good! Just his arms look a little like they are being stretched out in the back... But, actually, I think that's just the way the shadow of the arm connects with the black line of the back.
Im doing adeline. I'll fix the arms
@torkirby, i dont know what to do about the eyes... I tried other things, but...
(01-29-2009, 10:52 AM)ville10 Wrote: Guess I should help others by giving criticism too...
@Drshnaps: Both look very good, keep up the good work!
@Simona-King: Good, but he could be fatter, and the light bulb could be better shaped. Is also need to brighter, as if it was shining.
@A.J. Nitro: Shouldn't Big Waddle Dee be bigger, compared to the original sprite, he looks too small. Otherwise it's good.
@Zachattack888: Chip should probably be a bit pointier and he looks a bit small. You also need to move the eyes up a bit.
@Baegal: The eyes look really boring, check Kirby's sprite, the eyes are never just a straight line. The foots also seems to be pointing in the wrong direction compared to the rest of the body.
@Torkirby: Looks good so far, but I think you should remove the gray pixles below the hat and next to the eyes.
@Batandy: The eye needs to be rounder, and it also seems oddly colored. Check the Kirby's Dream Land 3 sprite for a reference. The yellow part could also use some more shading.
Also, shouldn't the rainbow sword be rainbow colored?
What do you mean by the foots are pointing the wrong way? I also tried with the kirby eyes, but it looked messed up... I'll try again...
And, is the shading okay?