Not to mention, the petals are actually just simple spheres.
@Batandy, I can't see your latest version.
EDIT: Okay, now I can.
First off, the eye looks better now. However, when he closes his eye... it looks weird...
The lineart for the petal thingies is still pretty bad. Try to make them look more spherical, but not too much. In the KDL3 sheet, the petals look like somewhat spherical tenticles; they're probably blobs of some sort.
Finally, when looking up and down, the eye should be looking in that direction, too, not towards the camera.
Oh yeah, more AA and shading.
Just fix those first, then you can focus on the other things, like the Rainbow Sword or more Dark Matter poses.
@Drshnaps, happy now?
@Batandy, I can't see your latest version.
EDIT: Okay, now I can.
First off, the eye looks better now. However, when he closes his eye... it looks weird...
The lineart for the petal thingies is still pretty bad. Try to make them look more spherical, but not too much. In the KDL3 sheet, the petals look like somewhat spherical tenticles; they're probably blobs of some sort.
Finally, when looking up and down, the eye should be looking in that direction, too, not towards the camera.
Oh yeah, more AA and shading.
Just fix those first, then you can focus on the other things, like the Rainbow Sword or more Dark Matter poses.
@Drshnaps, happy now?