01-27-2009, 01:02 PM
(This post was last modified: 01-27-2009, 01:07 PM by Jermungandr.)
Ugh. Dark Matter's body shouldn't have shading. He's PURE DARKNESS for cripe's sake. Black. Black. Black.
But that's really the least of your problems. The line art is cruddy and he's barely even circular. And his eye is ... don't even get me started on it.
I don't want to be mean, but that really looks like you're not even trying in the slightest.
[EDIT] Okay that was in reference to your LAST attempt. I didn't post fast enough.
@ville: I wasn't doubting that you had the color right. I just hadn't ever thought of it that way. It does look better now though. I don't have any complaints.
@AgentLym: I don't like the cape, but I'm having trouble finding words to suggest how to fix it. Try getting rid of the dark grey lines in the folds.
But that's really the least of your problems. The line art is cruddy and he's barely even circular. And his eye is ... don't even get me started on it.
I don't want to be mean, but that really looks like you're not even trying in the slightest.
[EDIT] Okay that was in reference to your LAST attempt. I didn't post fast enough.
@ville: I wasn't doubting that you had the color right. I just hadn't ever thought of it that way. It does look better now though. I don't have any complaints.
@AgentLym: I don't like the cape, but I'm having trouble finding words to suggest how to fix it. Try getting rid of the dark grey lines in the folds.