01-25-2009, 09:37 PM
(01-25-2009, 08:47 PM)platinumhorns103 Wrote:
Finished! How does it look?
It needs help. First and foremost, your icon for the sheet has an incorrect font. tSR sheet icons use Verdana, size 7, with no anti-aliasing.
Secondly, the sheet itself:
The lineart on the bottom wisp things on the Waddle Dees is poor, breaks out-of-style by having the black line disappear on some sprites, and has inconsistent shading/ anti-aliasing between the sprites.
The small Waddle Dees that appear when the pot starts spewing one out are out-of-style, namely: There's a black outline (his arms) inside the sprite rather than outside. The pot itself has out-of-style shading in that the light source should be coming from the top of the screen; You have it below the pot and at another point to the side of the pot. It's also missing anti-aliasing on its inner-outline.