05-24-2017, 07:18 AM
While I get that real life tends to get in the way, I can not stress the importance of understanding anatomy enough and as with your other pieces, this piece suffers from the issues you have made previously. Rather than repeat those same criticisms however, I have to take a step back and question how serious you are about improving yourself as an artist, with all do respect.
Here's my advice to you if the options are readily available: Take some art classes, Make yourself the time to study art if you are serious about cartooning or any other field utilizing art as skills. Haven't taken any in high school? you can always take some classes on the side as electives when you go to college should they offer some entry level courses. I think you'll get better guidance from a teacher or a professor who has the basic understanding of the ethics and skills you need to develop.
Because frankly, it would be pointless to repeat the same criticisms we told you just because you wish to use life as an excuse (and I'm not saying this in a mean way, mind you). And sure you can respond to us every time we post and update this thread all you want but you risk repeating the same mistakes over and over again and you are just going to frustrate yourself, and as a result the people who wish to help you. Until then I see no reason why most of us should continue to try to critique you when you already know where your problems are. But I think where your problem is lies in the work ethic that you present to us, and that can end up being a serious mistake for beginner artists.
Here's my advice to you if the options are readily available: Take some art classes, Make yourself the time to study art if you are serious about cartooning or any other field utilizing art as skills. Haven't taken any in high school? you can always take some classes on the side as electives when you go to college should they offer some entry level courses. I think you'll get better guidance from a teacher or a professor who has the basic understanding of the ethics and skills you need to develop.
Because frankly, it would be pointless to repeat the same criticisms we told you just because you wish to use life as an excuse (and I'm not saying this in a mean way, mind you). And sure you can respond to us every time we post and update this thread all you want but you risk repeating the same mistakes over and over again and you are just going to frustrate yourself, and as a result the people who wish to help you. Until then I see no reason why most of us should continue to try to critique you when you already know where your problems are. But I think where your problem is lies in the work ethic that you present to us, and that can end up being a serious mistake for beginner artists.