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Tarkan809 (Player?)
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Yes, it's an improvement in the right direction!

Here's my suggestion on how I would improve your sprite:
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First, no pillowshading. Simple one colour shading, if any.
Second, the wing is making the sprite's readability difficult, so we'll have to rethink it later. For now, it'll have to go.
Third, I inspired myself from various Hal artworks for the feathers, colour, beak and eye.
Fourth, I looked at bird references for the wings and feet.
Fifth, I modeled the design after toucans and with Hal's Rio appearance in mind.

I hope it helps Smile

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Tarkan809 (Player?) - by tarkan809 - 04-22-2017, 03:46 AM
RE: Tarkan809 (Player?) - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 04-22-2017, 05:38 AM
RE: Tarkan809 (Player?) - by tarkan809 - 04-22-2017, 07:24 AM
RE: Tarkan809 (Player?) - by TomGuycott - 04-22-2017, 09:45 AM
RE: Tarkan809 (Player?) - by tarkan809 - 04-22-2017, 10:05 AM
RE: Tarkan809 (Player?) - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 04-22-2017, 10:41 AM
RE: Tarkan809 (Player?) - by tarkan809 - 04-22-2017, 11:05 AM
RE: Tarkan809 (Player?) - by tarkan809 - 04-22-2017, 12:21 PM
RE: Tarkan809 (Player?) - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 04-22-2017, 03:06 PM
RE: Tarkan809 (Player?) - by tarkan809 - 04-23-2017, 03:09 AM
RE: Tarkan809 (Player?) - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 04-29-2017, 07:07 AM

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