Pokemon Pink

[X Gamer 66]

I tried fixing Tauros's leg by making it smaller to seem as though its further back. I redid Marowak's arm and head, both turned out really well IMO. I wasn't sure what to do with Dewgong and Snorlax, though.

Golem looks really nice so far, only real problem is our right foot, which is unnaturally twisted to far toward the screen, and a bit small. Otherwise, it's great.

Tauros looks awesome too, I'd say just make his tails a pinch longer and our rightmost leg a bit thicker.

Snorlax also is quite nice. The top of his back seems a little too highly raised and pointed. Also, I like the "Zzz"s, but considering the sprite would be flipped in its profile, I think it might be a good idea to remove them. Still looking great though.

Love Marowak, I don't see any problems.

Basically everything from Dewgong's "waist" down looks really off. Its tail is thin, its tail fin looks really sketchy, and its smaller fins look a bit too small.

Excellent stuff overall, though.

Lesse, I couldn't really get the swirl right, so I left a blank one, although idk, maybe one of the 2 are alright.

Edit- Dang, I just realised someone did Poliwag and that they couldn't get a pic in the first post. Oh well, sorry to have wasted your time.

Nah, you're good. Yours looks quite awesome, so I'd be glad to use yours, at least until the old one is posted and we can compare them.

Still doesn't seem quite right to me.

I'm thinking our right leg (more specifically, perhaps the right foot) is the main problem still. Definitely improving though.

Heh I saw too. No offense to Tuna but the one on the sheet is better.
EDIT: Okay, I made some last-minute changes to Dragonite (all I did was tweak the wings and change the shading a bit), but it's great, AND fits inside the max. dimensions. Oh, and Chris, sure. The Primeape's untaken so give it a shot .

Lineart's good, its a good pose, but its wings and the lines along the belly look sketchy and good use some AA touch-ups, and it's also way overhsaded. It's certainly coming along very well, though.

Okay. Will fix that.
There you go:

I'm not so sure about the cross now =|

Everything looks great, but its hands and feet need to be a lot bigger. Also, the body may look better with slightly more shading. Otherwise, it's awesome.


Sorry for general inactivity on my part, I'll try to set aside some time tomorrow so I can update the list.