DK RPG need advice.

[StarSock64]

On the mugshots:

Diddy needs some shading on his head for sure. It's too flat right now, and some shading could show that the hat is giving off a shadow.

Most of your line breaks (diddy/dixie's bodies, top lines of the um...uh...above the nose) are coming across as super unnecessary. Actually, the ... above...nose...lines ... are coming across too harsh as black lines, especially up against the whites of their eyes. Maybe you can use a brown instead or something. The upper lines of dixie's eyes seem pretty harsh too.

edit: oh oops that last part was fixed, I was looking at the wrong version, nevermind that