04-16-2014, 07:01 PM
there are a few places where the tail feels bulbous and not tapered,
and the shoulders are basically non existent. And the face has a whole derp thing going on. But I think the biggest problem would be the shading since it looks like it on a flat plane rather than a full character where shadows would wrap around his shape.
![[Image: a66b092d64fe3a802899270b4cb956bb.png]](http://i.gyazo.com/a66b092d64fe3a802899270b4cb956bb.png)