Some Critique, Please.

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e-er i'm honestly not sure which one is your version, ahahah

can you put only your latest one (unless you label them before/after)

The one on the right is his edit, the lack of extra shades is more noticeable on the right ear (it's right). It's a step forward, but look at this.

I took out each and every color you had here (Or I at least think I did, some of them looked so similar to each other that it was hard to get each individual color) and as you can see, the darker colors are all just too similar, which can make viewers, like Viper, not even recognize a simple edit.