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(03-31-2014, 09:34 PM)Vipershark Wrote: Okay, I finally got around to taking a look at this, and I immediately found out two things:
1) you have waaaaaaay too many shades (6? I think? for the blue and seven on the green but the black shades are so dark I honestly can't tell the difference between then but I think there are three.) and overall I counted 16 shades, not counting the pure black outline. For a sprite with so little colors, you could probably make do with like... six colors or so.
2) as stated already, your contrast is horrendously low so I'm working in trying to fix that a bit.

(03-30-2014, 11:35 PM)ClubbyBear Wrote: The thing is, the style is meant to be VERY dark, because of the way it's going to be made, but the palette you made is really good.

Can you elaborate on this?
Why does it have to be so dark?

It doesn't NEED to be, I just thought it might help make the game a bit stylized and on the character's design, but if lighter shades could help the contrast it might work out better.
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Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 03-29-2014, 10:27 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by E-Man - 03-29-2014, 10:44 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 03-30-2014, 07:16 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Paladin - 03-30-2014, 07:27 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 03-30-2014, 07:32 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Paladin - 03-30-2014, 07:43 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 03-30-2014, 07:44 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Gors - 03-30-2014, 07:54 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 03-30-2014, 08:07 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Iocus - 03-30-2014, 07:58 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Gors - 03-30-2014, 09:19 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 03-30-2014, 09:38 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Vipershark - 03-30-2014, 05:53 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 03-30-2014, 08:32 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Vipershark - 03-30-2014, 09:14 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by SchAlternate - 03-30-2014, 09:56 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 03-30-2014, 11:35 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Vipershark - 03-31-2014, 09:34 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 03-31-2014, 10:16 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Mag - 03-31-2014, 08:14 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 03-31-2014, 03:28 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Level 1 - 04-01-2014, 12:17 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-01-2014, 05:50 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Vipershark - 04-01-2014, 06:17 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-01-2014, 09:28 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Level 1 - 04-01-2014, 10:11 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-01-2014, 10:32 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Level 1 - 04-01-2014, 10:36 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-01-2014, 11:10 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Iocus - 04-02-2014, 11:39 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-02-2014, 03:32 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Vipershark - 04-02-2014, 03:54 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Level 1 - 04-02-2014, 03:58 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Vipershark - 04-02-2014, 04:10 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-02-2014, 04:12 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Vipershark - 04-02-2014, 04:21 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Iocus - 04-02-2014, 04:14 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-02-2014, 04:23 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Vipershark - 04-02-2014, 04:28 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-02-2014, 04:55 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Vipershark - 04-02-2014, 08:36 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Level 1 - 04-02-2014, 08:45 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Vipershark - 04-02-2014, 08:56 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-02-2014, 09:12 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Vipershark - 04-02-2014, 09:53 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-02-2014, 10:14 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Vipershark - 04-02-2014, 10:39 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-02-2014, 10:44 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Vipershark - 04-03-2014, 01:09 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-03-2014, 06:24 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Vipershark - 04-03-2014, 03:28 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Level 1 - 04-03-2014, 03:36 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-03-2014, 03:56 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Vipershark - 04-03-2014, 04:15 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-03-2014, 04:26 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by StarSock64 - 04-09-2014, 11:39 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-10-2014, 08:20 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-13-2014, 10:54 AM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by Level 1 - 04-14-2014, 03:18 PM
RE: Some Critique, Please. - by ClubbyBear - 04-14-2014, 06:51 PM

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