Eyes of doom, home project!

[Bombshell93]

thanks Goemar, though where I stand on my "talent", it is as I am, always a subject of learning. as always I stand by the idea that knowing objective flaws is the only way to reach something of respectable quality (subjectively or objectively) that said any problems you see in the style I'm pursuing I am very open to hearing, after all there's no point in taking inspiration from a style without applying artistic licence be it a simple change of character or an improvement to style.
if you think something can be improved give it to me blunt and I will try my best

EDIT:
well there is a lot wrong with this animation, but its a starting point. sort of. maybe.