12-08-2013, 02:56 AM
(This post was last modified: 12-08-2013, 03:03 AM by Sketchasaurus.)
Fist off, welcome!
Secondly, here's a thread so you'll know what people are talking about when they give you criticisms: http://www.vg-resource.com/showthread.php?tid=13868
The first thing that I notice when I look at the sprite is how far that she is leaning forward. the second thing that I notice is the eye burning bright pink that you used for a background. I'd suggest picking a toned down, neutral color like some sort of green or blue gray.
There are a lot of things that definitely need work, I'm sure that the others here can give a better crit than I. I'll fiddle around with an edit to show how I would fix it.
Secondly, here's a thread so you'll know what people are talking about when they give you criticisms: http://www.vg-resource.com/showthread.php?tid=13868
The first thing that I notice when I look at the sprite is how far that she is leaning forward. the second thing that I notice is the eye burning bright pink that you used for a background. I'd suggest picking a toned down, neutral color like some sort of green or blue gray.
There are a lot of things that definitely need work, I'm sure that the others here can give a better crit than I. I'll fiddle around with an edit to show how I would fix it.