Shadow Wave (previously an unnamed RPG)

[SuperGoomba]

Super-long gummy arms! The front hair bangs look quite jaggy and are a tad too long and there's a bunch of banding on the hair and arm shading (don't just shade along the edges, but try to show the volume instead. You don't need to cramp shading into every single small corner, this applies mostly to the bangs).

I made the front bangs a bit shorter and got rid of the jags. I also toned down the shading a bit, fixed up the shading on his face (under the hair), and moved his right (screen left) eye back a bit. Now that you point it out the banding on the arms and goggles is really obvious and looks pretty horrible, so I removed that.

I've made an idle animation for him too;


BTW thanks for your crits Previous, they've been very helpful