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[Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP
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TBH the craters would clutter it up even more (considering he's got the 3/4 perspective going on).
Also, I think the moon should be at least 2 or 3 pixels thinner. The way you have the perspective is very odd considering the way you have his face--I'd shift everything to the right, which will make the dark part thinner, but make the eyes more visible.
like this:[Image: sLvUqSj.png] (the right one).
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[Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Kirbyfan - 02-09-2013, 05:48 PM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Kirbyfan - 02-09-2013, 07:41 PM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Frario - 02-09-2013, 09:36 PM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Bombshell93 - 02-09-2013, 10:16 PM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Kirbyfan - 02-09-2013, 10:17 PM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by recme - 02-09-2013, 10:37 PM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Garamonde - 02-09-2013, 10:38 PM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Kirbyfan - 02-09-2013, 11:12 PM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Bombshell93 - 02-10-2013, 12:00 AM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Kirbyfan - 02-10-2013, 12:17 AM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Ton - 02-10-2013, 12:48 AM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Kirbyfan - 02-10-2013, 08:27 AM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Bombshell93 - 02-10-2013, 08:37 AM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Ton - 02-10-2013, 11:42 AM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Baegal - 02-10-2013, 12:32 PM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Kirbyfan - 02-10-2013, 08:32 PM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Kirbyfan - 02-13-2013, 08:35 PM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Garamonde - 02-13-2013, 09:06 PM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Gors - 02-14-2013, 01:32 PM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Kirbyfan - 02-14-2013, 05:18 PM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Baegal - 02-14-2013, 05:23 PM
RE: [Kirbyfan42] Mr. Shine WIP - by Kirbyfan - 02-14-2013, 09:11 PM

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