02-09-2013, 06:39 AM
your using selout quite poorly, the outer pixel of a line is always the darker one but on a few bits of the edge you put the dark pixel on the inside.
the curve to the body / face isn't that great a curve the anti-aliasing around the eyes is fairly pointless when the black is just too dark in the first place, I messed around with it and using your next darkest shade on bits of it helped to smooth it out.
the mouth has similar issues, the mouth also uses an indistinguishable shade of red which you might as well use black (that way you even have your other white shades to AA the teeth.)
some issues are still there but I did a quick clean up over it so you can see what I mean, (edit is on the bottom)
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the curve to the body / face isn't that great a curve the anti-aliasing around the eyes is fairly pointless when the black is just too dark in the first place, I messed around with it and using your next darkest shade on bits of it helped to smooth it out.
the mouth has similar issues, the mouth also uses an indistinguishable shade of red which you might as well use black (that way you even have your other white shades to AA the teeth.)
some issues are still there but I did a quick clean up over it so you can see what I mean, (edit is on the bottom)