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Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series
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There are a lot of jaggies in the sprite, a side effect of making them with a digital pen, maybe. Rework them to make the lines neater. Also, the shading seems to be really subpar/non existent, so you may want to take some more time on it.

Can you provide us the animated gifs of those animations? It's hard to give CC to still frames instead of animations.

Finally, she seems to be totally out of proportion compared to most fighting characters. Like, a lot. She is supposed to be a robot child, so her size must reflect that of one. I suggest using Marvel vs Capcom's Roll as size reference.
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Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-04-2013, 04:04 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Gors - 02-04-2013, 04:12 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-04-2013, 04:21 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Gors - 02-04-2013, 04:25 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-04-2013, 04:30 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Gors - 02-04-2013, 04:36 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-04-2013, 05:05 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Gors - 02-04-2013, 05:11 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-04-2013, 05:23 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Novally - 02-04-2013, 06:31 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-04-2013, 06:33 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-04-2013, 07:07 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Novally - 02-04-2013, 07:15 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-04-2013, 07:32 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Novally - 02-04-2013, 07:37 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-04-2013, 07:47 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Novally - 02-04-2013, 08:08 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-05-2013, 07:35 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Garamonde - 02-04-2013, 09:36 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-04-2013, 11:20 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Previous - 02-04-2013, 12:30 PM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by 2blackbar - 02-04-2013, 12:32 PM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-04-2013, 12:58 PM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Novally - 02-04-2013, 03:18 PM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by 2blackbar - 02-04-2013, 03:44 PM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Novally - 02-04-2013, 05:46 PM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Garamonde - 02-04-2013, 10:54 PM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by 2blackbar - 02-05-2013, 02:02 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by The KKM - 02-05-2013, 07:51 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Gors - 02-05-2013, 08:19 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by 2blackbar - 02-05-2013, 02:19 PM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Novally - 02-05-2013, 03:11 PM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-17-2013, 06:04 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Novally - 02-17-2013, 04:42 PM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-17-2013, 06:46 PM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-18-2013, 03:50 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Gors - 02-18-2013, 06:00 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Novally - 02-18-2013, 06:46 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-18-2013, 07:04 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Gors - 02-18-2013, 07:35 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-18-2013, 07:36 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Gors - 02-18-2013, 07:40 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Toshio - 02-18-2013, 07:48 AM
RE: Uran from Tetsuwan Atom series - by Gors - 02-18-2013, 08:03 AM

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