I couldn't make the skin outlines look good.
There are actually two things behind, one is the muffler ends, and the other is suppose to be a tail, but I forgot it till the last moment.
I think i'll try putting the muffler in front next time (probably shorter), and change the tail tip color to be darker then lighter. Not sure what to do about the skin. But i'll try.
EDIT:
Okay, decided to use a larger canvas. I also throw out the limited palette.
I drew this out at a much larger size first to avoid some of the more painful anatomy issues.
Big problem areas (to me), are the face (the face was impossible, I couldn't figure out how to make it look good at all), the hand and perhaps the pose (feels floaty). Not sure how to fix any of that.
![[Image: waka_2_by_chase_san-d5j6t53.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc01.deviantart.net%2Ffs70%2Ff%2F2012%2F301%2F6%2F9%2Fwaka_2_by_chase_san-d5j6t53.png&hash=5fe709253b0567b08bbb20213f1a896c)
But please if you have any comments, criticisms or suggestions on how I can improve. Please let me know!
It has a lot more detail, but for some reason I don't like it as much as the smaller one (perhaps because the mistakes are more obvious to me).
There are actually two things behind, one is the muffler ends, and the other is suppose to be a tail, but I forgot it till the last moment.
I think i'll try putting the muffler in front next time (probably shorter), and change the tail tip color to be darker then lighter. Not sure what to do about the skin. But i'll try.
EDIT:
Okay, decided to use a larger canvas. I also throw out the limited palette.
I drew this out at a much larger size first to avoid some of the more painful anatomy issues.
Big problem areas (to me), are the face (the face was impossible, I couldn't figure out how to make it look good at all), the hand and perhaps the pose (feels floaty). Not sure how to fix any of that.
But please if you have any comments, criticisms or suggestions on how I can improve. Please let me know!
It has a lot more detail, but for some reason I don't like it as much as the smaller one (perhaps because the mistakes are more obvious to me).