Food Fighters

[Natis]

I like the idea you have going here lol. But I'm not sure about that dithering on burger knight (?)'s hat. It's jaggy near the middle.

I see what you are saying.

Is this any better? I tried the one of them without the dithering. What do you think? It suppose to be a metal helmet, so I was just trying to figure out the proper shading to get that across.

All of your colors need to be brightened, I think. That's a rather bland tomato.

Does that mean brighten the contrast? On the bright side, at least you could tell it was a Tomato, huh? And from someone of your renown, that's good! (Even though I've only posted 3 times, I used to post back on Pixeltendo, and lurked every now and then. >_<)
Anywho, I'm not an expert on colors, but I tried brightening the shade on the tomato.

you should start by fixing up the line art, the hot dog especially looks pretty sloppy

Yikes! That's not good!

Is this better? Or at least a step forward? That probably mean I need to work on his left arm after taking a second glance...