06-29-2012, 01:42 AM
There's a lot of pillow shading, and not much attention paid to the light source. Don't just shade around the edges of the object - try using it to show the shape of it, but also pay attention to where the light is coming from. For most of this piece, it's coming from the top left. so why doesn't the nose cast a shadow on the rest of his face? Why is there shading on the inside of his cheek, which is pointing towards the light?