11-08-2008, 11:09 PM
(This post was last modified: 11-09-2008, 01:07 PM by Geo the Fox.)
@SBW: His feet are too small, his legs shouldn't be visible, he has shading--he shouldn't--, the top part of his head looks more like a wing instead of a head-fin-thing, the blue is too dark, the red is too dark, the face isn't curved enough around the back, he's too tall, his head is too big, the eyes are too big by extension, he's missing arms, the thing on his back is probably too small, but his body is too big anyway so it's probably fine, get rid of the shine in his eyes, the angle is off, the head-fin is also too small, but that might be accommodated when you shrink the head, the thing he's holding could stand to be longer, even IF he was supposed to have shading--he's not, cause he's classic--the contrast is both inconsistent and too little.