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[Rosencrantz]

It's still kind of nice to see someone making a story like this and not totally flip out because people are expressing their dislike for it. It's pretty refreshing, and I can tell you're a pretty likeable guy just because of this c:

Though, sadly, fanfics are pretty much the lowest forms of creative writing. Then you put this in a script style, which is extremely hard to do effectively despite looking so simple.

TO BE COMPLETELY FAIR, THOUGH, I shouldn't tell you to stop writing fanfiction altogether; in fact, writing fanfiction is actually a really good way to develop really important creative skills that you would need in real-world scenarios, since you're essentially making paracosms. However, you would probably be better off creating more original tales with original settings, original characters, and various other original things that would really help you flex your mind more. Fanfictions admittedly have constraints for you to work around, and being able to work around constraints is a really important ability to possess, though doing more original works will help you develop your own constraints - and therefore teach yourself to predict constraints through defining what you think SHOULD be constraints (also important in real life).

It just wouldn't be too good to try and present them in a serious manner, though, since people tend to not take them seriously