Super Smash Bros. Clash

[Makermatic21]

what the fuck is this supposed to be



I mean, I've read quite shitty stuff here in tSR, but this takes the prize, really. What is this? Is this a story? Is this a game idea script? I have no fucking idea. In fact, the story is so littered with in-game scripts that completely kills the flow of the story (if it even has one).

Okay, I just read through all this text. There is simply nothing interesting in the story at all, period. Either make a conventional narrative story, or keep those scripts to yourself. No one on tSR wants to read boring stuff.

I under stand your confusion, so please read today's chapter 1: The adventure begins post to clarify anything you may not comprehend. Thank you by the way for your constructive criticism. Any publicity is better than none, so do continue to read and comment on my future works. I look foward to it.

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Needs more Giygas.

Thank you for your response. Be sure to check out today's post: Chapter 1: The adventure begins. I can tell you now Giygas will not be in this particualr story ( Maybe future works) but there will be plenty of Earth Bound action! When you ask? You'll just have to keep reading to find that out