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Initiating Poetry Sequence
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Thanks Alex and Lexou. I know there are some minor typos and such, it was written on my iPhone at 12 am.

I know the syllable count does constantly change, but I thought it flowed nicely as well. Since its 1/1, if someone else says something about it I'll look into it.

I tried to have it flow as best as I could, as close to Dr Suess as I could get it. However I lack the technical prowess to write in an anapestic tetra meter, so I constantly repeated it and tried to go by ear.

And Lexou, this confrontation happened a good time ago, and I honestly don't won't to reopen such wounds. I'll wait untill I'm out of college, where I'm out of the house and financially independent
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Initiating Poetry Sequence - by [robo9] - 05-15-2012, 12:32 AM
RE: Attempt at a Poem - by alexmach1 - 05-15-2012, 12:58 AM
RE: Attempt at a Poem - by Lexou Duck - 05-15-2012, 02:05 AM
RE: Attempt at a Poem - by [robo9] - 05-15-2012, 07:07 AM
RE: Attempt at a Poem - by [robo9] - 05-15-2012, 10:29 PM
RE: Attempt at a Poem - by alexmach1 - 05-15-2012, 10:54 PM
RE: Robo Poetry - by [robo9] - 05-16-2012, 07:56 PM
RE: Robo Poetry - by Lexou Duck - 05-17-2012, 02:11 AM
RE: Robo Poetry - by [robo9] - 07-09-2012, 11:23 PM
RE: RoboStream [o] - by [robo9] - 07-26-2012, 11:23 PM
RE: RoboStream [o] - by Garamonde - 07-27-2012, 07:56 AM
RE: RoboStream [o] - by Baegal - 07-27-2012, 11:45 AM
RE: RoboStream [o] - by Previous - 07-27-2012, 01:51 PM
RE: Initiaing Poetry Sequence - by Hoeloe - 09-06-2012, 07:50 AM
RE: Initiating Poetry Sequence - by [robo9] - 12-04-2013, 11:47 PM

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