I think you need to touch up in a few places such as the outline, eyes, and shading. Also that outline needs to stay more constant with the sprite and the eyes need less shades of blue.
I made an example
I made an example

![[Image: 3zxZV.png]](http://i.imgur.com/3zxZV.png)
i'm back(kirby custom sprites
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