Okay, if you say this story is "completely original" aside from that one detail like you say it is, lets have a look at it then and dissect every part of this plot.
Bear in mind, My statements are in bold and anything that is italicized in them is in fact sarcasm. If I am being harsh, you may have to just suck it up because it seems like you haven't even read a single criticism without thinking about it so now I'm just going to be straight out brutally honest.
Yeah, bullshit this doesn't resemble anything in OoT. The only details that did change were the parts that would have been affected by "what if" part of the plot. And there's a ton of things here that that completely go against the Zelda Universe mythology here.
Sorry to burst your bubble, but your claim that "this doesn't resemble any of the story in OoT" is a delusion. A lie that you try to believe is true. I have told you earlier, this isn't a story you and your friend came up with in two years all you did was just pull some "what if" thing into the plot of OoT to make it fresh right out of your ass. Try making an original story and then you can tell me you have in fact worked on it.
Bear in mind, My statements are in bold and anything that is italicized in them is in fact sarcasm. If I am being harsh, you may have to just suck it up because it seems like you haven't even read a single criticism without thinking about it so now I'm just going to be straight out brutally honest.
Quote:Story:
The crack in the hole to the forest's sword is unnoticed by many...
A small child, by the name of Link is on a mission to collect a sword and a shield. A Kokiri boy tells him of a secret hole, known to many as the Hole of Z. oh yeah, this reminds me of the beginning of ocarina of time where I had to find a sheild and sword to get to the deku tree, how exciting... Link is about to enter, when he notices the crack. Being curious, he touches it...
The entire wall caves down. The sword is lost forever.
this is ironically the only different part of the story, a huge what if.
SEVEN YEARS PASS
oaky, so it still sounds like OoT except link has his balls drop earlier in the game.
Link, the Kokiri boy that grew up still lives in the forest. He is an outcast from the other children. oh look another part of the what if plot, Link is now giant and everyone except possibly Saria hates him for that.
The Deku Tree's Spirit guards the Kokiri, since he died in vain. Then, in the middle of the night, the Deku Spirit leads Link into Hyrule Field. Much has changed...Originality at it's finest right here yup indeed, this is the same thing as what happens once you pull out the master sword in OoT, except earlier.
The King of Theives, Ganondorf has taken over Hyrule. not taking any points off here since this happens nearly every Zelda game.
By stealing the three Spiritual Stones, he opened the Door of Time. There, the Master Sword waited. another part of a big WHAT IF.
Using the magic of the Gerudos, he extracted the sword's spirit, Fi, and pulled the now normal sword out of the pedestal. okay, if ganon is evil wouldn't Fi, who is supposedly the power within the master sword, been able to prevent ganondorf from using the magic if he was evil? That's kind of inconsistent with the idea of "the master sword can not be touched by evil hands" and that should at least imply magic would not work on it. Also a what if part but it's the only one that fails to make any sense.
The Sacred Realm corrupted at his touch. Implying this wasn't in OoT
The Triforce went to Ganondorf, Zelda, and the Triforce of Courage remained in the realm. No one was worthy enough.
Will you be worthy enough to save Hyrule and become the Hero of Time? The choice is yours...
Implying that Link, who is your person, will eventually get the triforce of courage. which also makes no sense because Link was born with the triforce of courage if I'm not mistaken.
Yeah, bullshit this doesn't resemble anything in OoT. The only details that did change were the parts that would have been affected by "what if" part of the plot. And there's a ton of things here that that completely go against the Zelda Universe mythology here.
Sorry to burst your bubble, but your claim that "this doesn't resemble any of the story in OoT" is a delusion. A lie that you try to believe is true. I have told you earlier, this isn't a story you and your friend came up with in two years all you did was just pull some "what if" thing into the plot of OoT to make it fresh right out of your ass. Try making an original story and then you can tell me you have in fact worked on it.