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[StarSock64]

The way the hood just sort of attaches itself to the shoulder doesn't really make sense. The zipper isn't centered, there's a serious lack of contrast, and there's pillow shading/banding (banding is mostly in the face, weird knee shading, etc.)

Have you tried making sure the body makes sense under the clothes? Try to give the shoulder better definition. Maybe try to mess with the bottom of the hoody so it's not just a straight line? It kind of looks like a weird metal bar that doesn't wrap around the waist properly right now.

The legs could use a bit of shaping. The way the farther leg can be visually broken up as three big boxes is really distracting. The negative space (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Negative_space) forms a lot of distracting rectangular chunks too.

Try to find a few references!